domenica 7 ottobre 2012

1.06 - Confrontations

Jinny loves the outdoor, she's in her school scout team and she especially like fishing. Her friends don't really perceive her as a girl, she's just part of the group for them. That's why her growing up generates mixed feelings among them. She's a girl now, she has never tried to hide it but it's also very clear now, she's her mother's daughter after all. Others couldn't pretend she wasn't but that didn't stop her from being the same as before.


Brandon went to prom with Sherry, he wasn't sure about his dancing due to his clumsiness so was very surprised whe they voted him prom king.


Myra got pregnant and Jaron was excited.


Brandon wanted to believe what Shirley told him, he didn't have much experience with girls. He wasn't very popular, no one from the chess club really is, he does have some female friends but this would be his first romantic story. Brandon has always understood math better than romance, people says he's a genius but he often miss things obvious for others. 

He got a call from his friend Joann saying they needed to talk about Sherry. They met at the park because Joann's brother, Harrison, was still mad at him.


Joann has been Brandon's friend for a long time and she wants to warn him. There are rumors about Sherry, she's known for changing boyfriend easily. Joann had warned her brother too but he wouldn't listen, he had a crush on her since childhood. Brandon is kinda shocked, he may not trust Harrison but Joann is one of his best friends.

"Sherry has tried almost every boy in the school." Joann said. "Tried?"
"Yes, tried, because she go out with one a couple times than she gets bored and picks another" Joann continued "My brother has watched her for a long time, he couldn't approach her, he isn't exactly the best looking guy. Suddenly one day she talked to him and they started going out."

"She told me they were just friends, could it be a misunderstanding?"
"You're too innocent, she'll never admit it, why don't you open your eyes? There are better girls who will be happy to be with you"


Brandon went to Sherry's house after talking with Joann.

"You never noticed?" Sherry said. "She has a crush on you"
"She's on your same clubs, she barely know how to play chess, and she's following you around that's creepy. I thought you you knew and didn't say anything for kindness"

Now Brandon isn't sure of anything anymore, Joann's his best friend but Sherry has a point. Who should he believe?


* I'm getting better, this time I even wrote dialogues. Still no real answer, I kinda want to leave this open. I just installed Relativity and I feel I have so much more time, the reason why there are so few pics of Jinny's childhood is because after school, school activities, homework and sleep she had very little free time before. My old graphic card screwed the first picture, I still used it because she has a lovely expression, I just bought a new one and I may be able to raise the quality a bit too... at least now I can see the pets.

2 commenti:

  1. I'm voting, er rooting for Joann, she's way nicer than Sherry! :D

    You have some very interesting characters! Congrats on the new graphics card!

    RispondiElimina
  2. It's great Relativity is working for you and giving you more time to develop your characters! I couldn't possibly write a story without it!

    I'm rooting for Joann too!

    RispondiElimina